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Monday, July 30, 2012
Sunday, July 22, 2012
A Flash of Memory
What Herman
loved most about Nicholas was his strength.
“Don’t
move,” the dark haired man whispered as he placed firm metal hands on Herman’s
hips in the dark. “And don’t make a sound.”
Herman bit
his lip as a wet tongue trailed down his stomach, past his navel, tracing a
path onto his hips. The metal hands-cold at first, but warming on Herman’s
hips-moved down too, to rest on Herman’s thighs, where his flesh joined the
metal of his own enhanced legs.
Nicholas
pinned Herman’s legs down, hard. He was one of the few cyborgs in their platoon
that intimidated Herman with his sheer power.
Then he
swallowed Herman’s weeping erection in his soft warm mouth, and Herman forgot
about everything but the sensation of being sucked. Fire traveled through his
body, peaking at the root of his cock, and coiled there, surging with every
movement of the dark haired man’s mouth.
“Nicholas…”
He breathed a moan, fighting not to buck his hips. “So good.”
He nearly
cried out when Nicholas released him. “Be quiet,” Nicholas hissed, a smile
evident in his tone. Herman nodded, wondering if Nicholas could see it. He
didn’t know if the other cyborg had infra red or not.
Nicholas
returned to his task, and Herman choked back another moan. The other man’s
tongue wrapped around the head of his cock as he pulled back, his lips tight,
and Herman surged, the darkness of their shared room obliterated by pleasurable
nothingness.
Nicholas
leaned down and kissed him hard on the lips, sharing Herman’s semen. “Tomorrow
will be my turn,” he whispered. “I want you inside me tomorrow night.” He
kissed him again, then left, padding across the floor to his own bed.
Herman
nodded once more in the dark.
***
Herman had learned quickly that he
had to duck to fit through the doorways of the ship they flew on. It aggravated
him, all the more so because he had so little to do.
“Another day of inactivity.” Reiner
grumbled from his place at the table as Herman and Nicholas sat down. “The
pilots get to do all the work.”
“It’s not so bad,” Nicholas said,
grabbing a piece of dried rations from the center of the table. “They don’t
find transports, we get to relax. They do, they blow them up-we get to relax.”
“I want to board and take
prisoners, like we’re supposed to.” Reiner raised his voice. “I was not built
this way to sit around.” He clenched his metal fist.
Nicholas shrugged, brushing crumbs
off of the finger of his gloved hands. He peered at Herman out of the corner of
his eye, and Herman shifted, his face heating. Nicholas could do a lot when his
hands were gloved…
“Well if we never see any combat-”
Reiner began to protest, and then the alarms rang.
“Looks like your prayers are
answered,” Nicholas said with a frown. “That’s the tone for one of the King’s
defense ships.”
“Finally.” Reiner stood up, heading
toward his room to get his weapon. Herman followed suit, his heart already
beginning to pound.
***
Herman knelt by Nicholas, gripping
his laser tightly while gunfire pinged around them, lead bullets bouncing off
the metal walls of the ship.
“There are four of them,” Nicholas
whispered. “I’m going to shoot out the lights. Infra red and take them out
while they’re blind and confused.”
So he did have infra red. “Yes.”
Nicholas raised his laser and fired, the sizzling red beam slicing through the
cable that jutted from the ship’s wall. As the room plunged into darkness,
Herman activated infra red and stood, the defenders moving in shrouds of red
and green.
He fired his own laser, just once,
slicing through all four-but not before a bullet pinged off of the metal wall
behind them. Nicholas thudded to the ground, the sound like a club.
“Nicholas?” Herman dropped his
laser, placing a shaking hand on Nicholas’s shoulder. His blurry form shifted
in Herman’s infra red vision, as blood pooled below him.
“I’m hit,” Nicholas wheezed. “Bad.
Ricochet.” Herman swore aloud. The only advantage the defenders’ ancient
weapons had were those ricochets. How stupid to forget that! He hit the button
on his belt, the one that would send an emergency signal to their ship. Help
would come. It had to.
“Can you get up?” Herman’s heart pounded
sickeningly in his chest. Nicholas…no. The only person Herman had ever met who
was like him, who knew what it was like to be a cyborg and would indulge in
pleasure…This couldn’t be happening. Chilling fear tightened his throat.
“Nicholas, can you get up?”
“I don’t know,” Nicholas coughed. “I’m
bleeding. A lot.” Herman swallowed
against a sick anxiety.
“Relax,
Herman,” once again he heard the familiar smile in Nicholas’s words. “I’ll be
fine. We won, right? I just have to get to sick bay.” He gave a tired sigh,
tight with pain.
A door
crashed open, familiar popping sounds filling Herman’s ears as three other men
entered the room, bursts of heat as they fired through the door visible in
infra red. He heard Reiner’s bellow of rage.
Another
laser blast, and the men went down. It took every bit of training Herman had
not to call for help. If there were other enemies, that would only bring death
down on them both.
The room
was silent, the only sound Nicholas’s labored breathing. It began to grow
softer, and Herman’s heart raced, even faster than it did during battle. He had
never lost anyone before. He couldn’t lose Nicholas. Where were the medics?
“Nicholas!”
he hissed.
“Sh, Herman…”
His voice was weaker, labored with pain. “Go on. Win the battle. Help can’t
come otherwise.”
Herman’s eyes narrowed. “I’m not
leaving you here.”
“Don’t be stupid,” Nicholas ground
out, and his words stabbed. “Fight for me.”
Herman’s gut twisted as he leaned
down kissed Nicholas softly on the lips. “I’ll come back. I promise.”
***
He met up with Reiner in the hall
outside the room. The two cyborgs teamed up without a word, taking down
everyone who approached.
Every minute of battle felt like
hours. Herman couldn’t keep his mind off of Nicholas, off of the bleeding form
of his lover on the ground and the sensation of his soft lips. That wouldn’t be
the last time they kissed. It couldn’t be. He would fight, and Nicholas would
live.
Every shot he fired was perfect.
When a desperate soldier tried to sneak up on him from behind, he whirled and
used the hidden blade in his artificial arm to dispatch him with little effort.
He ignored Reiner’s nod of appreciation.
Sweat dripped down his neck-and
then the communicator at his belt buzzed. The ship shuddered.
They had won.
Herman whirled, heading back down
the halls to where Nicholas lay. The lights came on, power from the generator,
as he entered the room.
A pool of blood lay on the floor.
Nicholas was gone.
***
“Where is he?” The small medic outside
the sick bay backed up against the slate gray wall, his eyes wide. “Tell me
where he is!” Herman demanded.
“Soldier!” Herman froze, the voice
of Commander Nitle echoing off of the ships walls. “You are out of line. Come
with me.”
Swallowing his fear and anger,
Herman fell into step behind Nitle. He towered over the unmodified man, but he
would never dream of disobeying.
“It was a hard battle?”
“Nicholas was injured,” Herman
tried to keep emotion out of his voice, and failed. “I…he is a friend.”
“Yes, I see.” They turned the
corner, and Herman stifled a sigh. The Da Vinci’s. Maintenance after a
battle-routine.
“Relax, Herman. This will take a
bit longer than usual.” He wanted to ask why, but he would never question the
commander. As soon as this was done, he would go and see Nicholas.
He closed his eyes as the Da Vinci
bots spread over him.
Some time later, he sat up, testing
the strength in his modifications. His head hurt, just slightly, but that could
just be a stiff neck from lying on the metal table for so long.
“Greetings, Herman,” Commander
Nitle said with a smile. “I am pleased to inform you that you will be
reassigned after helping to win the battle today. Your belongings have been
collected. Report to the shuttle bay.”
“Yes sir.” Herman stood, and for a
moment he wondered if he had somewhere else to go-someone to see.
No. There was only one other cyborg
on this ship, and he and Reiner had never really gotten along. “Thank you,
sir.”
***
“Herman?”
Blaze’s voice intruded into his thoughts. “Does it work?”
Herman
removed the electrode-covered tiara, staring down at the looping wires. Ancient
technology, but powerful. They had discovered a lot in this dead city.
“Yes, it
does.”
“That’s
great!” Blaze’s green eyes shone. “What did you remember?” Blaze leaned against
him, his lips cool on his forehead. “Anything interesting?”
“A few
things.” The number flashed through his mind from Aver’s computer. 25-61S. And
now he had a name.
Nicholas.
He would
never be able to keep his promise. The Distant Rule had made him break it.
Herman pulled
Blaze closer, the smaller man gasping as Herman hugged him. He would never
break such a promise again.
Tuesday, July 17, 2012
Congrats to the first winner!
Congratulations to Kari over on Goodreads, who won a free copy of Remembrance! The prize has been sent out!
The contest to win a free copy of Air is still on over at Hearts on Fire reviews!
The contest to win a free copy of Air is still on over at Hearts on Fire reviews!
Monday, July 16, 2012
Interview and another giveaway!
Check out my interview at Hearts on Fire reviews!
If you leave a comment, you can be entered for a chance to win a free copy of Air: Book one of the Waterlord Trilogy!
If you leave a comment, you can be entered for a chance to win a free copy of Air: Book one of the Waterlord Trilogy!
Friday, July 13, 2012
Giveaway!
Hey all, who's up for a game?
This game is easy. All you have to do is check out the Goodreads Gay Science Fiction group and post in my Author of the Month thread. If you do, you enter your name into a hat (it's a virtual hat, very spiffy) with a chance to win my newest release! Below you can find the blurb and a sneak peak at the first chapter.
So what is being released? Drumroll please:
This game is easy. All you have to do is check out the Goodreads Gay Science Fiction group and post in my Author of the Month thread. If you do, you enter your name into a hat (it's a virtual hat, very spiffy) with a chance to win my newest release! Below you can find the blurb and a sneak peak at the first chapter.
So what is being released? Drumroll please:
The war is over. The majority of humanity has
fled the dying planet to live in space, leaving behind a chemical called
Overgrowth that will speed up the restoration of the war torn world.
Some were left behind, and not all by choice.
As one chapter of humanity comes to a close, a soldier who thought he had
nothing left and a historian who sees potential even in destruction will make a
life out of what remains.
Chapter 1
A man strode out of the
forest, his blond hair gray in the ashy light of the streetlamps and the
roiling fog, which clung like a cat to his legs. A loose hinge on the side of
his tattered briefcase rattled lightly as he walked.
“Got anything?” A leathery man held out a hand
from the shadows, his voice creaking as he spoke. “Just a bit?” The tall man
passed by without answering, and the beggar became lost in the fog.
The man walked by metal structures, some of
them leaning crazily to one side or the other and some standing firm.
Flickering lights and fluorescent hums marked those that had survived, though
the signs spelled only gibberish in the roiling mist. Pictures could still be
made out, mostly of red lips, long legs and huge breasts. Words were
unnecessary. The man turned down a narrow street, putting his back to the
signs.
There were no leaning buildings here, and the
grit from the main street had amassed in full so that the man’s footsteps
crunched rather than clacked. Wooden buildings, dwarfed by the metal ones still
visible in the skyline, promised light and food. Voices could be heard here,
female and male, laughing uproariously at some common joke. The words here were
etched or carved into the wood. The man took his chances on one, a sign that
waved in the damp wind with faded letters that promised “Bes Drosoph in the
City.”
A woman whose ribs showed through the skintight
clothing she wore opened the door for him, a smile plastered on her face. “Lemme
guess-pounds over pity?”
The man nodded, the pupils of his eyes
constricting painfully in the light. He didn’t usually stay long in these
places, where those who had been left behind scraped to live as they could, indulging
in the glaring phosphorescence of the buildings that surrounded them.
His feet thudded heavily on the wooden
floorboards, making them creak. No one looked up save for one young girl
bedecked in plastic pearls, and she smiled at him as winningly as she could
with a mouthful of graying teeth.
The man looked away, focusing on the rough
grain of the wood as he took a seat. A group of men to his right slapped their
table, making the dishware rattle.
“Over here, Nella!” The girl’s wide hips swayed
invitingly as she walked, the folds of her blue dress brushing the man’s ear as
she strode by. She turned to smile at him, a ruby rictus, before a long haired
man grabbed her with one arm, pulling her into his lap.
“You’re good luck, beauty.” He chuckled, and
she bit her lip as she adjusted herself to straddle the burly man’s knee. His
thick arm completely covered her waist, and she slumped in his grasp.
The tall man turned away, carefully placing the
battered briefcase under the table. For a time he closed his eyes and basked in
the presence of other people, letting their conversations wash over him. He had
traveled alone for a long time.
“Ouch! Don’t bite me!”
“Four aces!”
“Have you heard? Another youth gang hit the
food stores.”
“Oh really? Then why do we have this then?”
“You think this is any good?! I shoulda ordered
the pork. And this beer tastes like weasel piss.”
“There are no weasels here, idiot.”
Forks clanged on plates, feet tapped on the
floor, and laughter rose and fell. Low voices discussed sweet nothings in the
room above the lounge, and he tried to make out what they said.
A tap on his shoulder finally stirred him from
his concentration. “You can’t sleep in here, you know. You need a room for
that.” The slim hipped woman from before stood over him, a twang of annoyance
in her voice hiding behind her plaster smile.
“I’m merely relaxing,” he spoke, his voice a
rasping whisper. “May I order a meal?”
The woman blinked long lashes in surprise at
his voice, and her mouth turned down. “What do you want?”
“The pork.”
“To drink?”
“Just water.”
The woman sashayed away to fulfill the request.
The man closed his eyes, letting the voices in the room wash over him once more.
When his food arrived he ate slowly, waiting for the water that was supposed to
accompany it. Then a clatter at the table caught his attention.
A dark haired man had sat down across from him.
“What’s your name?” he asked hurriedly, his
voice pitched low.
“Aldric,” the man answered, pain finally blooming
in his throat as he spoke. He tensed as he watched the other man’s eyes rove
around the room like a hunted animal. His damaged, rasping voice, ordinarily
off-putting to the people he met, didn’t seem to faze this one.
“Alright, Aldric, I’m Daniel. Just pretend you
know me. Please? Just…talk.”
“What about?” Aldric listened. There was
nothing dangerous here that he could sense, no indication of what this man
could be running from. Then again, with no real law enforcement, no structure
since the end of the war save for one rule—survive
as long as you can—a certain amount of
paranoia was expected.
“Where do you live? Around here? I don’t
recognize you.”
Aldric sighed. “I am a traveler. I’ve come from…inland.”
“A traveler?” Some of the tension left his
companion, replaced with curiosity. “How far have you come?”
Aldric looked away from the other man’s gaze, watching
as the woman who was supposed to be serving him water got waylaid by two men
who stared at his new companion out of the corner of their eyes. One of them
palmed the woman’s breasts, and the other whispered in her ear. She smiled and
her eyes met his. “A long way.”
“I’d love to hear about your travels,” the man
said, speaking just a bit louder to get his attention. Aldric shifted his gaze,
wondering if his new table companion had noticed the two men. His eyes were
fixed on Aldric. “No one here has ever left and come back.”
“Is it…nice here?” Where had the two men gone?
Now there was only the woman, filling the pitcher, and the other one, called
Nella, shrieked as some other man tickled her.
Finally the other man followed his gaze. “Look,
I’ll buy you a nice woman for the night if you just—”
Aldric stood and caught the knife that had
whistled through the air inches from the dark haired man’s ear, the blade
slicing through the fabric of his glove and then stopping. He turned and locked
eyes with one of the men, the one who had whispered to the girl, who ran out
the door. Voices quieted for only a moment before the buzz resumed. Something
like this was not uncommon here.
The dark haired man’s eyes boggled. “Are…is
your hand alright?” He reached for it, and Aldric snatched it away, pocketing
the knife.
“There’s still one more. You should leave.”
“Alone?” the man squeaked. “Why not come with
me?” When Aldric narrowed his eyes, he continued, “If you’re a traveler, you
need a place to stay, and you’ve already saved my life once. Let me repay you?
C’mon, I need your help.”
Aldric raised an eyebrow. If he was desperate
enough to be begging strangers… “Lead on then.”
The two stood up together and headed out into
the dirty night air. Aldric had never gotten his glass of water, but he threw a
few coins onto the table anyway.
As he followed the man, who walked hunched as
if to hide himself, the dingy shops gave way to shacks and houses, gaping holes
in the sides on some of them signaling either the presence of an inhabitant or
lack of one. No shortage of housing here. Mud began to squelch around Aldric’s
boots as he walked further, and though the streets were more mired and pitted,
at least the houses began to look nicer as they moved away from the heart of
the city.
Aldric watched his new companion closely. He
had seen his like before, the same furtive, nervous walk that betrayed a long
time of persecution, coupled with a strong desire to live. What did this man
have to live for? Who targeted him? This curiosity led Aldric to walk silently
behind Daniel, using years of training to accomplish the same vigilance that
Daniel clumsily tried to perform.
He sensed them long before Daniel did, and gave
no sign of it. Three men and a dog. The dog attacked first, growls cutting the
night, and Aldric stepped in front of its target, throwing him arm up as the
animal leapt for Daniel.
Teeth clamped down, and Aldric spun and threw
the animal to the ground, shoulder muscles straining under the weight. With a
pivot he faced the men who had begun to run toward them with clubs held high.
The fingers of his right arm twitched, as though preparing to fire a gun he did
not hold.
The men slowed and stopped when they saw the
dog limping away, realizing their ambush had failed. The two groups faced each
other for a moment before the men shrank back into the shadows, scattering and
disappearing behind houses and fallen wood.
“Once again, thank you.” Daniel moved close to
him, so close Aldric could smell his piney scent. He kept clean, too. Unusual
in a place like this.
“Is you arm alright?” Aldric took a step back,
giving Daniel a firm nod. The man stared, his gaze fixed for a moment, before
shrugging and turning.
“Come on. We’re almost there, and I don’t think
they’ll try anything again tonight.”
* * * *
They crossed a muddy, pitted track that was once probably a
creek or stream, the forest looming close and the lights and stink of the city
receding. Fitting.
“Here we are.” Daniel jogged up the steps of a stone
house that looked to once have housed at least two families. Unlocking numerous
deadbolts from keys on his belt, he thrust the heavy metal door open and waved
Aldric inside. Fluorescent lights stung his eyes as he entered, ducking through
the warped doorway. It looked almost like a bunker.
“Let me see your hand. Take off your gloves.”
Daniel moved toward him, arms outstretched.
“No.” Aldric firmly stepped away. “I am fine.”
“That dog bit you! I saw it! And the knife…” He
trailed off in the face of Aldric’s firm stare.
“So you’re really fine?” Aldric nodded,
standing stiffly in the foyer.
“Fine then. Well…I guess I owe you hospitality,
and breakfast too, since you saved me twice. Do you want to sleep now, or maybe
you could tell me about your-”
“Sleep,” Aldric said gruffly, ignoring Daniel’s
disappointment. “Do you…have running water here?”
“I do. There’s a bathroom and sink down the
hall. You can sleep here on the floor, or if you don’t mind, we can share the
bed in the other room.”
The offer tempted him. Once such an offer would
mean something, but now Aldric knew that sharing a bed was simply a necessity
of the times, a comfortable place to sleep snatched whenever and wherever it
could be. Even so…he couldn’t risk it.
“The floor is fine.”
“Really? Well, if you’re sure…”
“I am.”
“Alright. I have extra blankets. There’s no
heat, but that hasn’t been a problem for years now.” He flashed a sad smile. “I
guess I’ll head to bed. Um, thanks again for your help. I hope…I mean, well…”
Aldric cocked his head, waiting.
“It’s nothing. I’ll take you out for breakfast
in the morning. Good night. Give me ten and then the bathroom is all yours.”
Aldric ran a gloved hand through his hair, then
set up his blankets into a makeshift bed on the floor. Daniel confused him,
being kind, or perhaps desperate, enough to invite him into his home after
having barely known him. Other people in his travels had rarely been so caring.
It would certainly not last, so he might as
well try to enjoy it. Aldric prepared for sleep after Daniel entered the
bedroom, shutting the door behind him. Rummaging through his suitcase, Aldric
moved his gun and tools out of the way and took out a change of clothes, then
locked it up again. He slept in the clothes he had worn that day, down to the
gloves. He would change in the morning, before Daniel awoke. It would not do if
the other man saw him.
Sleep came
easily, unusual for Aldric.
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Monday, July 9, 2012
Time for a checkup
Children have pediatricians that they see every year or so of their lives. The receive preventative care. After all, it would be ludicrous to never send your kid to the doctor until something went wrong. Adults also get checkups yearly to make sure everything is in good working order.
This is all for physical ailments. What about psychological ones? Why do we wait until the situation is dire until we see a mental health professional?
Any researcher or clinician will tell you that millions of people are walking around with undiagnosed mental illnesses or subclinical symptoms. These people could benefit hugely from a simple half hour check in with a psychologist.
Why don't we have psychological check ups, the same way we have physical checkups? This would be hugely beneficial in multiple ways. One, it would aid in the identification of people who are at risk for or who are developing serious mental illnesses, like depression or schizophrenia. Two, it would help those with less severe illnesses or personality disorders, who could benefit from a few therapy sessions or group therapy. Three, it would aid in the norming of the population-part of the problem in psychology is that there is no clear definition of healthy. This may also prevent over diagnosing, as the clinician wouldn't be operating on the assumption that simply because a patient walks in, there's something very wrong. Four, it would be a way to refer children who are at risk of developing into a potential problem to get help. Five, it would be another way to identify children who are in risky or unsafe situations. And six, it would reduce the stigma of seeing a psychologist in the first place.
And, of course, it would give all those psychologists who are being churned out of graduate schools a secure job.
Everyone knows physical health is important. So is mental health, and preventative care is something that should exist.
This is all for physical ailments. What about psychological ones? Why do we wait until the situation is dire until we see a mental health professional?
Any researcher or clinician will tell you that millions of people are walking around with undiagnosed mental illnesses or subclinical symptoms. These people could benefit hugely from a simple half hour check in with a psychologist.
Why don't we have psychological check ups, the same way we have physical checkups? This would be hugely beneficial in multiple ways. One, it would aid in the identification of people who are at risk for or who are developing serious mental illnesses, like depression or schizophrenia. Two, it would help those with less severe illnesses or personality disorders, who could benefit from a few therapy sessions or group therapy. Three, it would aid in the norming of the population-part of the problem in psychology is that there is no clear definition of healthy. This may also prevent over diagnosing, as the clinician wouldn't be operating on the assumption that simply because a patient walks in, there's something very wrong. Four, it would be a way to refer children who are at risk of developing into a potential problem to get help. Five, it would be another way to identify children who are in risky or unsafe situations. And six, it would reduce the stigma of seeing a psychologist in the first place.
And, of course, it would give all those psychologists who are being churned out of graduate schools a secure job.
Everyone knows physical health is important. So is mental health, and preventative care is something that should exist.
Saturday, July 7, 2012
The Amazing Spider Man
It's been a long week at work for me, but I finally got free time this weekend to see a movie: The Amazing Spider Man!
I figured I'd post my thoughts here.
Let me preface with the fact that I did enjoy the movie. I got my money's worth. But I do think that this remake was unnecessary, and the movie is unfortunately less enjoyable and coherent than the previous SpiderMan movies (with the exception of Spider Man 3, which I like to pretend doesn't exist).
Spoilers below:
So, first we have the origin story. Like in the last Spider Man movie, Peter Parker gets his powers by being bitten by a genetically engineered spider. This is the first thing that bothers me. There is an entire room of these spiders in the lab he enters. One bite from any of these spiders could apparently give someone spidey powers. And yet we're expected to believe this is the only time it happens, and the rest of the time these spiders are totally ignored? Peter Parker, who is supposed to be a very intelligent character, doesn't think to tell Dr. Connor that the spiders in his lab bestow super powers? I miss the comic version of the origin story-the radioactive spider.
Second, Peter learning the ability to control his powers is glossed over in an unsatisfying montage. I felt very much like I was expected to know a lot of things already (like the fact that one of Spiderman's most important abilities is his "spidey-sense" that lets him predict upcoming danger) in order to understand how Spiderman did the things he did. Also, he repeatedly shows off clearly superhuman strength to his classmates, but no one reacts, which makes it feel more cartoonish than it should.
Third, the romance was just annoying. It wasn't unrealistic or anything, but Peter's character during the romance scenes was inconsistent with his character at other times. His awkward-teenager act was just obnoxious, and the love interest was so bland I don't even remember her name. Again, Peter Parker is supposed to be an intelligent character, but he doesn't act that way throughout the movie, and especially not in the romance scenes. It was inconsistent and annoyingly immature.
And last, Lizardman is an unsatisfying villain. His motives were clear at first, but then I guess we're supposed to assume he just goes crazy after using the serum. There's no real reason given for why he goes crazy, or why the algorithm didn't work, or why lizards seem to follow him around. It just happens.
Again, I liked the movie. It was entertaining. But for a more satisfying, more coherent version, check out Sam Raimi's version from 2002.
I figured I'd post my thoughts here.
Let me preface with the fact that I did enjoy the movie. I got my money's worth. But I do think that this remake was unnecessary, and the movie is unfortunately less enjoyable and coherent than the previous SpiderMan movies (with the exception of Spider Man 3, which I like to pretend doesn't exist).
Spoilers below:
So, first we have the origin story. Like in the last Spider Man movie, Peter Parker gets his powers by being bitten by a genetically engineered spider. This is the first thing that bothers me. There is an entire room of these spiders in the lab he enters. One bite from any of these spiders could apparently give someone spidey powers. And yet we're expected to believe this is the only time it happens, and the rest of the time these spiders are totally ignored? Peter Parker, who is supposed to be a very intelligent character, doesn't think to tell Dr. Connor that the spiders in his lab bestow super powers? I miss the comic version of the origin story-the radioactive spider.
Second, Peter learning the ability to control his powers is glossed over in an unsatisfying montage. I felt very much like I was expected to know a lot of things already (like the fact that one of Spiderman's most important abilities is his "spidey-sense" that lets him predict upcoming danger) in order to understand how Spiderman did the things he did. Also, he repeatedly shows off clearly superhuman strength to his classmates, but no one reacts, which makes it feel more cartoonish than it should.
Third, the romance was just annoying. It wasn't unrealistic or anything, but Peter's character during the romance scenes was inconsistent with his character at other times. His awkward-teenager act was just obnoxious, and the love interest was so bland I don't even remember her name. Again, Peter Parker is supposed to be an intelligent character, but he doesn't act that way throughout the movie, and especially not in the romance scenes. It was inconsistent and annoyingly immature.
And last, Lizardman is an unsatisfying villain. His motives were clear at first, but then I guess we're supposed to assume he just goes crazy after using the serum. There's no real reason given for why he goes crazy, or why the algorithm didn't work, or why lizards seem to follow him around. It just happens.
Again, I liked the movie. It was entertaining. But for a more satisfying, more coherent version, check out Sam Raimi's version from 2002.
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